[quote=jadentearz]Hasee** And to be honest I don't really find it funny at all. The dialogue is very forced and there's too much of it. The best captions are generally short and concise. :( [center][url=http://temptryst.deviantart.com/][/url][/center][/quote] Thank you, I thought I needed to make it shorter, and now that I think of it, it is forced. The Bakery

[quote=Pip]I agree I've never seen one that long be in the actual contest, and I have no idea what your last sentence is about? Pun or a mispelling of the word weight? :P[/quote] I think I miss spelled wight. The last sentence is about the Hase pulling the Snuffly, and grunting. The Bakery

[quote=davymuncher]Erm it's a bit long to be a good laugh. To shorten it, leave off those last 2 dialogs, Add a better pun into Snuffly's line, and the Red Usul says too much. I'm not good at the writing though, so I can't really help in direction of HOW to change it. [font=VladimirScrD][/font]00100100 00110001 00110000 00100000 01111001 01101111 01110101 00100000 01110011 01101000 01101111 01110101 01101100 01100100 00100000 01100111 01101001 01110110 01100101 00100000 01101101 01100101 00101110[/quote] Thank you for good advice. The Bakery

How is this one? Red Usul: If you can't be a Shoyru then your fired!!! Your replacement is over there! Yellow Lutari *Thinking*: How could a Snuffly replace me. Snuffly *Singing*: I'm a birdy tweet tweet tweet. I can soar through the sky! The Bakery

Never mined the caption changed! Ill let y'all know the winners. Thanks for the advice. The Bakery

Here are the winners: Lutari: Erm... I can't remember my lines. Usul: Well, perhaps you should have studied them instead of wasting an entire day refreshing the Create-A-Pet page in hopes of getting a free Draik! Usul: Are you trying to tell me that the Invisible Random Event hit our ENTIRE audience? Lutari: It's better than having to tell you that I forgot to print the fliers. By sugarypixiestix2 Slorg: Who is this guy? Lutari: I have no idea... he just walked in and started yelling at us. Slorg: Oh, must be the director. Usul: Why don't we have an audience? Lutari: Umm... Usul: You left the doors locked again, didn't you? (I dont get the one below) Usul: No, no, no, you're doing this all wrong! Lutari: Maybe if someone would stop using my head as a platform for Hasee Bounce I'd get it right! Usul: Uh, sorry, but the Wacky and Weird contest is already over. Hasee: What have you been eating?!? You must weigh a ton! Snuffly: I had an anvil for breakfast. Lutari: What was that last line again? Usul: You're fired! Lutari: No, that's not quite it. Usul: What happened to everyone in the audience?!? Lutari: They're all rolling around on the floor laughing at this costume.... Hasee: Can we go ahead and get started? This Snuffly isn't getting any lighter and I'm already on overtime. Lutari: I don't want to wear purple! It's an ugly colour. Hasee: *glares* Out of all the ideas to try and transfer a Lutari.... Snuffly: A little closer, I can almost reach his wallet! Lutari: I'm having a hard time getting into character. Usul: Just think about flying and how happy it makes you, and what a proud Shoyru you are. Lutari: I hate heights... Usul: NO, YOU DON'T! GET INTO CHARACTER! Usul: If you're going to complain about the fit, then next time you can be the one who hangs around Uni's Clothing all day getting elbowed by restockers. I did the best I could! The Bakery